November 13th, 2008
Fantasy Story 12: Enemy Within - 19
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I hope you enjoy reading the strip as much as I enjoy making it, making today’s strip has been the most enjoyable yet.
You can leave a comment to influence the course of the story. The story so far has been influenced by previous comments, most notably a distrust of Andrik and Yolo.
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Artmaker: @jhorsley3 i make a webcomic: http://tinyurl.com/65og9n 11/25/08 11:04pm- Artmaker: [comic] The Paladin did the cooking: http://tinyurl.com/65og9n 11/13/08 06:18am
November 13th, 2008 at 12:19 pm
Wow, that was a surprise. Is the Paladin trying to kill them?
November 13th, 2008 at 1:48 pm
What the?!!
November 13th, 2008 at 2:31 pm
Why would Yolo tell the Paladin that?
November 13th, 2008 at 3:10 pm
oh man.
you are good.
that creature can’t be dead…
not so soon….
i don’t think so…
what’s happening?
this can’t be right…
the creature transform
into a big creature and creates
a havoc at the castle.
BOOM! BANG! the orange hair guy
tries to stop him by calming down..
and ANDRIK go… “yes, i was right.
this creature indeed is the…”
i dunno.. i suck at fantasies…
November 13th, 2008 at 4:35 pm
that creature’s got 18 lives! Ooops! 17 now.
November 13th, 2008 at 4:37 pm
it’s all part of the training. jot must always test the food before consuming. esp. those prepared by strangers. anyway andrik has antidote.
November 13th, 2008 at 10:01 pm
dude dude link my blog !! just artwork !! nothing epic like urs!!!
http://wakethedevil.blogspot.com/
November 13th, 2008 at 10:02 pm
u will also save many kittens
November 13th, 2008 at 10:10 pm
yeh thx!!! u just saved 1 kitten for 15 mins!!
November 13th, 2008 at 10:13 pm
it’s the least i could do after killing of a squrilroo in the comic!
November 13th, 2008 at 10:19 pm
I have a lvl 19 half eld cleric tat can ressurect ur squireel thing!
November 13th, 2008 at 10:22 pm
shin,haha…
we’ll szqueeze that into the comic one day, and you can do the art for that:)
and it’s a squrilroo by the way!
November 13th, 2008 at 10:24 pm
wow thx!!!
but really i have a lvl 19 elf cleric… his name is Clay Aiken!
November 13th, 2008 at 10:28 pm
Shin: Hahaha, I think you’ve just inspired the next strip, now i just need a good reference for clay aiken!
you ppl think todays strip was a surprise wait for tomorrow!
November 13th, 2008 at 10:29 pm
and lets not forget his travel companion lvl 1 wizard david blane
ill illustrate both of them n put on my blog!
November 13th, 2008 at 10:32 pm
ok!
November 13th, 2008 at 11:34 pm
nice site. the image before the jump is a little confusing though. might want to work on that.
cheers.
November 14th, 2008 at 12:16 am
actually you know what, clay aiken will not appear in tomorrow’s sztrip, but i’ll have to say that is funny:)
November 14th, 2008 at 12:27 am
Henn Wei, Thanks for your thoughts on the design of things, I will work out tweaks as we go along to make it a better experience for everyone:)
Cheers! and thanks again..