Fantasy Story BETA 2: Prisoner - 5
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“Just so you know, Fantasy Story is a Reader Collaborative story, that means, you can leave comments, and that shapes the story… give it a try:)”
Commentry:
The idea is to post 3 panels at the time, but I needed the extra space for the first panel and had to make it double sized. So there’s actually 4 panels worth of comics here!Â
Why does that matter?Â
Well.. All the panels are drawn the size of your regular collectible trading card, and when I finish a story arc, I’ll cut out the pannels and give them out as prizes or something… maybe tokens of appreciation to everyone who leaves comments, or bribes… actually I wonder if people will pay for them, hmmm.
On to the Comments:
Here’s where you get to suggest how the plot might fold, name characters that haven’t been named (at the moment, that’s everyone) And generally live out your ambition of being an arm-chair cartoonist!
Okay it’s your turn, ready…GO!
Artmaker: Finished Penciling- Fantasy Story 3 & 4... but you can still influence the story here: http://tinyurl.com/45zszg 10/04/08 05:36am- Artmaker: @imwithsully http://tinyurl.com/45zszg is what I ment:) 10/02/08 06:40am
- Artmaker: Fantasy Story 2: published! http://tinyurl.com/45zszg 10/02/08 04:56am
October 2nd, 2008 at 11:04 pm
i want that creature to bite his finger.
the last panel feels like an anticipation
of it.
*chomp!*
*eeeeeeee!*
October 4th, 2008 at 10:31 am
come on dude!
get to it!
we want more!
we want more!
October 4th, 2008 at 11:41 am
I like that “biting his finger” idea, and then the frame after that he says, “Okay! Go ahead and cut off it’s legs!!!” Ha-ha-ha! Okay, that “might” be a little too dark, huh? ;P
My 1st impression was that it looks like a draft…a bit rough? But that’s not a “bad” style. I just “could” be more polished, but doesn’t necessarily have to be?
Thanks,
Brian
October 4th, 2008 at 12:14 pm
Thanks Chin Yew and Brian:
For the “biting idea” and the follow up. but we’re going to cut away from the dwarves for a time, (i just felt like drawing dwarves that day:) .. go back to the main character
Thanks also for the notes on style. I will take all comments on style into consideration, as I develope the visual handwriting of ‘Fantasy Story’.
I hope you all come back and see your feedback in action.
November 9th, 2008 at 5:23 am
This is shaping up nicely. It looks like there will be some crazy hijinks in the future.